This room is for Aimee Gibbs, Andrea Agosti, Christine Quinn, K & Lois Griffin

thanks girlsssss y’all are the best now let’s win this hoh!

Sofia C was the one to start that alliance by the way and it was hard to just be like “no.” It was barely spoken in, so I want to make that clear here. Y’all are my priority and I hope I was at least be able to show that by keeping Christine over both Sofia C and Alison

You’re good girl I mean if they were your priority I wouldn’t be here lmaooo it was a useless thing to throw out

She really went off! Blew up everyone’s game or so she thought

I think Mama was right about her wanting her five minutes of fame before her exit

Also, my story is coming together.. terribly. My idea is funny, but I am just not an experienced enough writer to articulate it correctly. I've written half of it already, so I'm going to save the other half for tomorrow and then try and make some edits to what I already have

Yeah Mama definitely hit the nail on the head.

I think the route for inexperienced writers is always like comedy I think that’s where we have the best chance bc I’m the same I’m not that great at writing. You probably ate and your just putting yourself down!

i mean i’m the same i think i have a pretty creative idea i just do y know how to articulate it into a writing piece

If you guys need help with anything let me know! I’ve come close to being published before and my professors always admired my writing

omg you have? that’s iconic wtf!!

i have i think a really creative unique idea it’s just the writing part that’s gonna cost me i think

The biggest thing is having an introduction that will grip the readers’ attention
Also, don’t get so bogged down in detail that you spend half of your story describing everything

Thanks lois I have my trap idea I just need to figure out how to put it into a story

I got my person and I got how I want to torture them, and I even worked in the word asparagus already

this is what i have so far.

who: Pinocchio traps Geppetto
trap name: puppet mathster
what: suspended in the air using multi coloured puppet strings over a floor full of spikes, there will be an equation relating to the colours of the strings and they will have to count the strings and solve the equation, however every 60 seconds a string will be cut.

just need to implement it into a story

Lois Griffin wrote:

The biggest thing is having an introduction that will grip the readers’ attention
Also, don’t get so bogged down in detail that you spend half of your story describing everything

Well shit. All I wrote yesterday was an introduction and then detailed how Cardi kidnapped Nicki..

OMG PLSSSS UR WINNING